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The Elements by ~MakePovertyHistory:iconMakePovertyHistory:



It lay gently on the soft of the sky,
Beaming on the city and started to cry,
It looked up at the stars,
And cried, 'IT USED TO BE OURS!'
Then went back down to die.

The wind howled ferociously like a bear,
Crying for help looking everywhere,
It looked at a child,
Looking despetly wild,
And dies on the spot right there.

The sea kicked the rocks with angry rage,
Feeling like being trapped in a cage,
'I WANT TO BE LET GO,
No one will know,
The war that the oceans will wage.'

The fire flickered with an angry roar,
Trying to get itself out the door,
He tried to go off,
But got terribly lost,
And the elements will rule no more.
©2005-2008 ~MakePovertyHistory
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Submitted: March 28, 2005
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I made this up ages ago in school, it's quite strange and really bad in some places, but otherwise, it's ok, and plus, one of them isn't even a element! ^^;

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~MentalOverload:iconMentalOverload: Mar 28, 2005, 7:26:32 AM
Very good. Earth, Wind, Water and Fire...they are the elements, aren't they?!? You are certainly learning my friend, very good experimentation with personification. Just watch the spelling :p

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Audaces fortuna iuvat
~rockerchick17:iconrockerchick17: Mar 28, 2005, 3:29:18 PM
wow! this is very good! i like it!

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:blackrose: just because u have one doesnt mean that u have to be one :blackrose:
~Maliceah:iconMaliceah: Mar 28, 2005, 4:18:37 PM
Man, considering what happened again today in Indonesia, this is a timely submission. I loved the phrase "soft of the air" brilliant.

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"Would that I were a fig you would know my insides were soft and voluptuous, that you might partake of my flesh and eat"
Lady Kellington of Yore (from :iconMaliceah: gallery)
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